大学申请文书写作辅导 

      文书写作对于申请某些专业,比如工程、商科、设计、媒体、艺术类专业,有着至关重要的作用。大学招生官在查看申请者的6门学分课均分以及单科成绩之外,还要严格审核申请文书。在当今这个分数“满天飞”的留学时代,招生官已经无法通过分数识别优秀学生。他们更为看重文书写作和网络面试,因为这些可以更全面的展示学生水平。

     文书写作不是简单的罗列自己的经历。优秀的文书写作基于申请者的真实经历,发掘亮点,并作适当润色,需要导师和学生密切沟通。导师要有敏锐的洞察力和归纳能力,不但要筛选核心要素,更要斟酌哪些要素能够与所申请的专业匹配。符合申请者自身真实情况并渗透真情实感的文书作品才能打动招生官。  

辅导学校

          工   程:多大,UBC,麦吉尔,麦克马斯特,滑铁卢等

          商   科:多大,UBC,麦吉尔,西安大略,皇后等

          计算机:滑铁卢,麦克马斯特等

          设   计:多大,OCAD等

          媒   体:瑞尔森,卡尔顿等

备注:同时辅导美国、英国、澳洲、新西兰等名校申请文书写作

辅导内容

经历剖析:仔细分析学生个人经历,如义工,club,竞赛,社会活动等
挖掘素材:针对性分析个人特点,深度挖掘个人经历闪光点,初步寻求可以匹配的材料
提炼素材:根据不同大学与专业要求,严格甄选材料,匹配各项条件,确定核心素材
组织材料:最终确定材料使用先后顺序,从不同角度突出个人特点与优势
内容修改与文字润色:根据文书语言与用词特征,精改语言,润色内容

大学申请精品文书展示

商科专业精品文书

       I could never forget those six nights; I could never forget how I indulged myself into the complex world of cryptocurrencies; I could never forget that passion, that excitement, and those wonderful seminars an exceptional Harvard student taught me. That was the summer of 2017, as splendid as Shakespeare's midsummer night dreams. Thank you, classes of Bitcoin and the future of money: Because of this interest-based opportunity, I get to explore what finance is, how corporations operate and ...

 

       商学院精品文书

 

        Throughout my high school career, I have enjoyed being involved in a variety of clubs, both within school and outside of school. As the president of the school chess club, I feel quite proud of myself by holding an intramural tournament in grade 11, which no one has never done before. To organize a tournament within school, I first, held an extraordinary meeting to discuss the schedule of the tournament and propose my plan regarding tournament rules and schedule, which we will run one game every Monday noon during the lunch time, with 5 rounds in total, each round will have a 45-minute time limit for both players ...

        工程专业精品文书

         I expect to learn Mechatronics, an interdisciplinary program of mechanical and electronics aimed to improve automation, because it can help improve our efficiency of production by inputting least labour but gaining the most productivity. With the aid of AI development, Mechatronics will facilitate human comfort and make people have more entertainment. Humans are further freed from labour and have more time to fulfill their own pursuits of interests. UW boasts the power and spirit in Mechatronics research. UW engineering is the largest engineering school in Canada and ranks top 50 engineering schools worldwide ...

 

 

           计算机专业精品文书

 

           After this incident, I thought a lot about teamwork, responsibility, and life. I was deeply inspired to see how people working in different areas with various skills and knowledge came together to reach one goal. When the seemingly trivial work from each individual worker connects seamlessly, it becomes a formidable team able to accomplish a much more significant mission. In a race with death, nothing matters more than responsibility. With every second slipping by, life is in greater danger, so every member of the team must do their best to maximize the team efficiency. They must be fully focused on the parts they are responsible for, and fight for every possible second, because a life might hang on that second. These organized and small contributions build the invincible strength of a team. Before becoming a leader, I want to be a part of such a great team, to transform my determination and passion into a driving force to make a positive change ...

 

        生命科学专业精品文书

        We are in symbiosis with nature. As we gain more knowledge from our discoveries about nature, we find and create new materials that can enhance the quality of our lives, prevent sickness and pain. We had been exploring how we could help someone recover faster from a cold; we had been searching for chances to regenerate one’s organs and prolong their life; we had been wondering if we could fix a mistake from a gene. We wondered, we assumed, we executed, and we practiced. We either succeeded or failed, then we learned from it. In 2020, our relationship with nature meets formidable challenges, but I believe nature has taught us a good lesson: our knowledge about nature seems finite and our road to know about nature is still long. I’m determined to embark on this journey ... 

           

 

         建筑设计专业精品文书

           I totally agree with Juhani Pallasmaa’s view of the real beauty and its indication for architectural design. Very sadly, in this modern era characteristic of high-tech image, the real beauty from our original imagination and innovative thinking is losing. To many places we go, the modern metropolitan cities in particular, we are fed with skyscrapers competing to be the highest. I think they are boring and repetitive, though there do exist some changes and differences. At night, in the neon, these buildings are really eye-catching, with shining lights and compelling altitude, but these are only superficial and showy, not presenting a real and true sense of beauty and aesthetics ...

            媒体专业精品文书

         My passion for media all started from an early experience at 7 years old when my mother took me to the cinema for the first time to watch an animation. The charm of film media became a seed deeply grown in my heart.  The beautiful pictures, sound effects, and everything else was magnetic to me. Young as I was, I told myself: one day I should make my own film or at least be a part of this industry in the future. Many people often ridicule about such childish dreams, saying “they can’t become reality or make it a future career”.  True, I know nothing about film, but the first impulse has always been there ...

 

         艺术专业精品文书

          Deeply engaged in music from a very young age, I started receiving some essential musical education that dramatically nurtured my patience and concentration. When I practiced piano, for instance, I would spend hours committing to the music that I enjoy. While playing, I would imagine the message that the music can deliver; I would often have an urge to reorganize the notes to make something new. Sometimes, a few casual notes taken down on the paper can inspire me to a small song. This natural and carefree statement proved to benefit my creativeness a lot. I can easily memorize the tune of a new song and use it to adapt old songs...

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